P2 Operate sound equipment
Health and Safety
Change Suggestions
From the storyboard it is seen that most of the camera shots will be standing still in which case we would need only a tripod without the full camera suit. This will not only make it easier to film, but also keep away any risks happening.
Another change that we could make is instead of having the camera pointing towards the bin, we can make it as a POV of the newspaper as Mikhail grabs it. and to extend the ending scene we could make it so that Mikhail bring the newspapers together to sort the clue to who is the murderer, and then get killed. This gives the viewer an understanding on who the murderer is as well. Another change I would suggest is the starting of scene 5.
On the storyboard it is planned to make Mikhail to enter into the detective's office and look around for the clues from the murder scene, we can change it so that while Mikhail is being investigated, the detective is being called and need to leave the room to answer it. At that moment Mikhail will look around the office and piece the clues together to find out who truly is the murderer.
And the last change suggestion is for Scene 3 where Mikhail is meant to leave the room after bursting into rage. In this scene instead it can be pieced with the phone call suggestion instead of leaving the room. Another piece of a scene that we can remove is the CCTV footage on Scene 4, it isn't very necessary.














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